Film Language test learner response

WWW: You start well and your camerawork answer is around a B grade. You're clearly revised some of the terminology but need to make it more consistent.
EBI:

  • Must focus on the question... use the key words in the question in the question in each paragraph.
  • lack of media terminology in place
  • lack of depth to answers. What impact is it having on the audience? Answer the question and offer ideas from more than one perspective- different interpretations.
  • Spelling, punctuation and grammar is poor 
  • Time management / stamina : Q3 and 4 significantly worse than Q1 and 2
Mark-22 Grade E


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